I reviewed two WP#1 of Tedibaer’s and Jaybloom’s. Both of their papers were really good. They have a strong statement to discuss with their audiences.
As for the Tedibaer’s writing, she needs stronger reasons if she wants to have her statement convince the audience.
As for Jay Bloom, his topic was really interesting to me. However, I am confused how he will conclude his writing. After reading their drafts, I noticed that I need to revise my draft. I really think that a strong and persuasive statement is important for research writing, especially in order to get the attention of the audience.
Also, I get one comment from Noe. He gave me to idea that I will give my audience some information which they will encounter. It was the good idea because that make my audience more interested in my writing.
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