Addressing my audience wants and needs.
My primary audience is female teen. Also I can consider parents teachers as my audiences. This paper is for my class. So my classmate and my instructor are my explicit audience.
As for teen, they think their future is the most important.
For teen, the evidence is the statistic results for researches.
It is also information which is provided by the media.
I think they are going to be interested, because the issue is really serious and they are living with the issue right now. They can be disagree with me. The media still showing many skinny body image. I need more and more evidences to convince them.
Clustering
Evaluating types of resources
Developing evaluation criteria
July 28, 2007
D#9,HW#4, Annotated Bibliography
Downs, D., James, S., Cowan, G. (2006, Jun). Body Objectification, Self-Esteem, and Relationship Satisfaction: A Comparison of Exotic Dancers and College Women. Sex Roles, 54(11/12): pp. 745-752, Retrieved July, 17, 2007, from Women’s Steadies database.
I found this article from the ASU library web-site. This article is about the research about body objectification, self-esteem, and relationship satisfaction differences between college women and exotic dancers.
Engeln-Maddox, R. (2006, Sep). Buying a beauty standard or dreaming of a new life? Expectations associated with media ideals. Psychology of Women Quarterly, V. 30,NO. 3 Retrieved July 17,2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This is also from the ASU library web- database. This article is about the how college female students ideas are influenced by media.
Bessenoff, G. (2006, Sep). CAN THE MEDIA AFFECT US? SOCIAL COMPARISON, SELF-DISCREPANCY, AND THE THIN IDEAL. Psychology of Women Quarterly, 30(3): pp. 239-251, Retrieved July 17,2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This article is about how women get effect from thin-ideal images in the media.
I found this article from the ASU library web-site. This article is about the research about body objectification, self-esteem, and relationship satisfaction differences between college women and exotic dancers.
Engeln-Maddox, R. (2006, Sep). Buying a beauty standard or dreaming of a new life? Expectations associated with media ideals. Psychology of Women Quarterly, V. 30,NO. 3 Retrieved July 17,2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This is also from the ASU library web- database. This article is about the how college female students ideas are influenced by media.
Bessenoff, G. (2006, Sep). CAN THE MEDIA AFFECT US? SOCIAL COMPARISON, SELF-DISCREPANCY, AND THE THIN IDEAL. Psychology of Women Quarterly, 30(3): pp. 239-251, Retrieved July 17,2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This article is about how women get effect from thin-ideal images in the media.
D#8,HW#3 Chapter 7
What is my rhetorical situation?
How do media and celebrities affect a women’s body image?
Purpose
To give information to teens, parents who have children, and teachers.
To help give them confidence and respect their own body.
Audience
Teenage children, Parents, Teachers.The research will also enlist people who related and worked to the media.
Personal Context
I was one of a girl who had low self-esteem and try to lost weight for appearances. I got strong influences by media. That is reason why I choose this topic for my writing.
Drafting a Thesis Statement
Precise Claim
The media should show and teach about the real body image and real beauty.
Reasons/Blueprint
The body image by the media is strong influences to teen children. That could cause not only eating disorder, but also low- self-esteems and more.
People should respect who we are.
Appearance is not all.
Female can do more than just care about appearance.
Complete Thesis Statement
The media should show the real body image to people because it would give people to encourage.
Understanding My Warrants
Yes
Yes.
May not. The today’s society is still obsessed with appearances. They can find those issues everywhere. They might not agree until the media completely change the ideal body image which they show in the media.
Generating responses to your research question?
How do media and celebrities affect a women’s body image?
People should accept who they are.
The real beauty is not the thing which the media create.
Developing Rebuttals
The appearances give people confidences and motivation.
The losing weight is good for the obesity person. The media might give them influences to try on diet.
The teen obesities are also one of the serious problems just as well as the eating disorder.
How do media and celebrities affect a women’s body image?
Purpose
To give information to teens, parents who have children, and teachers.
To help give them confidence and respect their own body.
Audience
Teenage children, Parents, Teachers.The research will also enlist people who related and worked to the media.
Personal Context
I was one of a girl who had low self-esteem and try to lost weight for appearances. I got strong influences by media. That is reason why I choose this topic for my writing.
Drafting a Thesis Statement
Precise Claim
The media should show and teach about the real body image and real beauty.
Reasons/Blueprint
The body image by the media is strong influences to teen children. That could cause not only eating disorder, but also low- self-esteems and more.
People should respect who we are.
Appearance is not all.
Female can do more than just care about appearance.
Complete Thesis Statement
The media should show the real body image to people because it would give people to encourage.
Understanding My Warrants
Yes
Yes.
May not. The today’s society is still obsessed with appearances. They can find those issues everywhere. They might not agree until the media completely change the ideal body image which they show in the media.
Generating responses to your research question?
How do media and celebrities affect a women’s body image?
People should accept who they are.
The real beauty is not the thing which the media create.
Developing Rebuttals
The appearances give people confidences and motivation.
The losing weight is good for the obesity person. The media might give them influences to try on diet.
The teen obesities are also one of the serious problems just as well as the eating disorder.
D7, HW#2, Annotated Bibliography
Durkin, S et al (2007, May ). An integrative model of the impact of exposure to bidealized female images on adolescent girls' body satisfaction. Journal of Applied Social Psychology, 37(5): pp. 1092-1117. Retrieved July 17, 2007, from Women’s studies database.
This article is that a research examined a model describing the interrelationships between individual characteristics and the extent of change in body dissatisfaction following exposure to idealized female images.
Gurari, I., Hetts, J., Strube, Mi. (2006, Sep). Beauty in the "I" of the Beholder: effects of idealized media portrayals on implicit self-image. Basic and Applied Social Psychology, 28(3): pp. 273-282. Retrieved July 17, 2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This is a article about the how the self- image get influenced by the media. Also they compared with self-evaluations and explicit self-evaluations influences from the media.
Dohnt, H., Tiggemann,M. ( 2006, Apr). Body image concerns in young girls: The Role of Peers and Media Prior to Adolescence. Journal of Youth and Adolescence, 35(2): pp. 135-145, Retrieved July 17, 2007, from women’s Studies database.
This article is about the study which aims to explore peer and media influences in the body image concerns and dieting awareness of younger girls, aged 5-8 years.
This article is that a research examined a model describing the interrelationships between individual characteristics and the extent of change in body dissatisfaction following exposure to idealized female images.
Gurari, I., Hetts, J., Strube, Mi. (2006, Sep). Beauty in the "I" of the Beholder: effects of idealized media portrayals on implicit self-image. Basic and Applied Social Psychology, 28(3): pp. 273-282. Retrieved July 17, 2007, from Women’s Studies database.
This is a article about the how the self- image get influenced by the media. Also they compared with self-evaluations and explicit self-evaluations influences from the media.
Dohnt, H., Tiggemann,M. ( 2006, Apr). Body image concerns in young girls: The Role of Peers and Media Prior to Adolescence. Journal of Youth and Adolescence, 35(2): pp. 135-145, Retrieved July 17, 2007, from women’s Studies database.
This article is about the study which aims to explore peer and media influences in the body image concerns and dieting awareness of younger girls, aged 5-8 years.
July 25, 2007
D#11,HW#4, Peer Review Reflection
I reviewed Alexis’s and Oscar’s WP#3 draft papers.
Their topics are both interested to me. And their paper look good to me. As for Alexis, she has some mistakes for the APA style citation. She forget put eh year of publication in parentheses. I found other students did the same mistake. After I reviewed their paper, I noticed I have to have more information for evidences. I realized that the enough information and evidences really help to make the statement more strong.
I turned in my draft too late. I am so sorry. It is totally my fault not to get any comment on my paper.
Their topics are both interested to me. And their paper look good to me. As for Alexis, she has some mistakes for the APA style citation. She forget put eh year of publication in parentheses. I found other students did the same mistake. After I reviewed their paper, I noticed I have to have more information for evidences. I realized that the enough information and evidences really help to make the statement more strong.
I turned in my draft too late. I am so sorry. It is totally my fault not to get any comment on my paper.
July 18, 2007
D#8, HW#2, Review Reflection
I reviewed Shawn’s and Jessica’s WP#2 draft papers. Their topics are both interested to me. And they did great job, except Shawn forgot to put retrieved date in hid citation. I also saw few other classmates’ paper, and they did the same mistake. I think this is common mistakes which we should be care about more. After I reviewed their paper, I might need to consider about prospects on my topic.
I got comments on my paper from Shawn and someone (there is no name on the comment). They give me various different perspectives which can consider on my topic. Those really help me to get idea for my writing.
I got comments on my paper from Shawn and someone (there is no name on the comment). They give me various different perspectives which can consider on my topic. Those really help me to get idea for my writing.
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